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Apr082011

Paris Encounter

 

How she intrigues me!

With her orange hair,

a fringe of ragged bangs

high on her forehead,

‘90s punk rocker style,

 

she sits in a corner,

leaning against the window,

gazes out at me

with such intelligent eyes.

She doesn’t look away;

 

she blinks, still holds my gaze.

What is this look?

I wouldn’t call it happy,

nor is it sad. Just aware.

Thoughtful. Musing.

 

She doesn’t seem to mind

my standing close to the window

talking to her in a low voice, enchanted.

She touches the glass with one horny finger.

Her breasts are gray over several folds of belly.

 

A shaggy orange cape, draped

over her shoulders, covers her long arms.

She grins wide, shows her sharp teeth,

and turning towards the glass, kisses me.

She glances up, looks away, shy,

 

gazes back at me.

There are giant branches of driftwood, dead trees,

thick rope and black tires in her house,

but none of that interests her.

She sits by the window, yearning.

 

I’d like to take her home, but everyone would object.

The gardienne would throw up her hands in horror;

our good bourgeois neighbors would be alarmed,

call a special meeting of the syndic[1];

even Marley le chat would be incensed.

 

Anyway, our ceiling is too low. In her native land,

she sleeps in a nest of branches she builds

65 feet from the ground, sometimes with a roof

to protect her from the rain. She’s a solitary

acrobate des arbres[2]athlete of the air.

 

 

[1] Syndic de copropriété, a board that oversees common property in an apartment building in France. Like a Coop board.

[2] Acrobat of the trees

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Reader Comments (19)

Oh wow....you had me at "how she intrigues me." Had me going, thinking she was a waif, a runaway, an abandoned teen. Yes, those are intelligent eyes. She is creating a kind of primal poetry in her own mind about YOU! I agree the neighbors would NOT be happy with this new addition to the family, nor le chat! <wink> Love, Julie
Friday, April 8, 2011 at 23:27 | Unregistered CommenterJulie
Julie!

Thank you! I've never looked into the eyes of an animal and seen so much subtle awareness. Whenever we enter this zoo at the Jardin des Plantes, we go straight to the leopards or the crowned cranes. But this time, it was this orangutan who held me there for almost an hour. She was really looking for connection.

Our syndic board is so conventional; they don't even approve of subletting. But the final decision was made by Marley, who shook his head in dismay. He picked us in part because there were no other animals in the house. Sigh.

Zoos confuse me. They're barbaric. Yet they give humans so much pleasure.

Love,
Kaaren & Richard
Saturday, April 9, 2011 at 0:42 | Unregistered CommenterKaaren & Richard
Funny!!
Saturday, April 9, 2011 at 2:30 | Unregistered CommenterRita
You must've been channeling Clint Eastwood (ANY WHICH WAY BUT LOOSE)! What fun.
Saturday, April 9, 2011 at 4:05 | Unregistered CommenterKate
Rita,

We like to amuse you!

Kaaren & Richard
Saturday, April 9, 2011 at 15:37 | Unregistered CommenterKaaren & Richard
Hi Kate! Which Kate? We know more than one.

I've never seen the Clint Eastwood film, "Any Which Way But Loose." Is there an orangutan character in it?

XO,
Kaaren & Richard
Saturday, April 9, 2011 at 15:40 | Unregistered CommenterKaaren & Richard
Kate:

We now channel Clint in The Hereafter, but his orang movies were fun, if a bit dated.

--Richard
Saturday, April 9, 2011 at 17:25 | Unregistered CommenterRichard Beban
Kaaren and Richard:

The poem and photograph have entered my heart this sunny afternoon, and I am in love with Her.

--Polly
Saturday, April 9, 2011 at 22:58 | Unregistered CommenterPolly
Polly!

We are in love with you!

And She wants to know if she can come live with you in Berkeley...? Is your ceiling high enough?

Love,
Kaaren & Richard
Saturday, April 9, 2011 at 23:09 | Unregistered CommenterKaaren & Richard
One of the best early to mid period Clint films is Bronco Billy. That is one from that period that holds up.

Lovely poem.
Sunday, April 10, 2011 at 0:59 | Unregistered CommenterAndy Hall
Hi Andrew,

Is Bronco Billy a film with an orangutan? How did I miss this surreal bit of Americana?

Thank you for the appreciation.

Kaaren & Richard
Sunday, April 10, 2011 at 9:52 | Unregistered CommenterKaaren & Richard
Love it!


Enjoy the beautiful day,
Christine Hueber
Sunday, April 10, 2011 at 11:04 | Unregistered CommenterChristine Hueber
Christine,

Thank you!

I'm looking forward to meeting you next week.

Best wishes,
Kaaren (& Richard)
Sunday, April 10, 2011 at 15:57 | Unregistered CommenterKaaren (& Richard)
it's complete and indulgent joy reading this stuff, i'd love to
reciprocate as soon as my fingers find their way to an untethered
keyboard.

best, hank - the bolinas gang
Tuesday, April 12, 2011 at 1:19 | Unregistered Commenterhank kitchell
Hank,

It's unadulturated joy to read of your enjoyment. I remember you running up and down the stairs of your Clay St. home in San Francisco, visiting Grammy Kitchell, and later visiting her together in the Sequoias. And later I remember you covered with mud on Kit and Gayle's land in Massachusetts. You were the laughing Mud Man! We've had similar adventures as Americans living in Europe. I look forward to hearing about your years in Denmark. And the adventure goes on.

Hope to see you again soon in Paris or maybe another family reunion?

Love,
Kaaren (& Richard)
Tuesday, April 12, 2011 at 1:50 | Unregistered CommenterKaaren (& Richard)
Kaaren: What a wonderful character you have so elegantly depicted. I was completely hooked by your slow mysterious reveal. Until the “horny finger” and the gray breasts I thought she was a foxy French girl. You have fallen head over heels hopelessly in love with an old orangutan.
Richard: The photo was the perfect finale. Bravo!
Tuesday, April 12, 2011 at 8:54 | Unregistered CommenterJon H
I tried to say this earlier (oilier?) but it wouldn't take my comment (seriously?)... I said at that time that your orang (for "man" or "person" of the forest) had the gravitas of Jeanne Moreau... something about her... you can almost imagine her in Jules et Jim. Well, maybe the savage version... There was a PBS film, one of those travel adventures with saucy and witty guides, this woman in Malaysia or Borneo at a Orang Utan preserve, and they come right up to you, all their huge size, and look into your face, and you can feel their fur... carefully, very carefully... and she commented on the long fingers, and the shivery, wonderful experience of being soooo close. And personal! (And yes, I loved your suspenseful way of edging up to a beast rather than a beauty... or both, really, but of surprise species!)
Wednesday, April 13, 2011 at 18:57 | Unregistered CommenterDaniel Abdal-Hayy Moore
Jon,

Thank you for this! She really was a foxy French female--but a woman, not a girl. I wish we had a bigger place.

Richard thanks you, too. Looking forward to the next installation of your screenplay.

Love,
Kaaren & Richard
Wednesday, April 13, 2011 at 23:37 | Unregistered CommenterKaaren (& Richard)
Daniel!

I see you know these dear creatures. Yes, that's what they're called, hommes des bois. Jeanne Moreau... yes, a similar gravitas. I'm going to call her Jeanne. It had to be a name that has dignity, and I think you've got it. Poets are the "namers" of the world, performing Hermes' magical role. Thank you! And the guide in the PBS film you saw who commented on their long fingers...it was startling how female this orang-outan's face and aura were, yet how very masculine the fingers: huge, gorilla-like, ancient, horny. I'd love to see this film. I'll see if I can track it down. Thank you, Daniel. How great it is to be back in touch with you and Malika.

Love,
Kaaren (& Richard)
Wednesday, April 13, 2011 at 23:51 | Unregistered CommenterKaaren (& Richard)

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